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If you haven't read Episode 1 it's right here: [link]
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Yes, the ending STILL needs some tweaking. Basically, Rynn was "just kidding" about poisoning Venn. Venn (now called Vengeance) was Renee's (Alias Rynn) human brother. I DO intend upon hitting more on when and why Rynn decided to become a Demon when, as Venn said, "she had so much potential."

And yes, Rynn's name is a shorter version of Renee. They sound similar even though they don't look the same, ya know, and this way her name bears a loose resemblance to the word "sin."

Note: I wanted Retalia's name to be Venadette (like vendetta) instead, but I was afraid it'd be too simlar to Vengeance, so I made it more like the word "retaliate."
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